Comment+on+1st+Speech+Presentation+on+1st+Week+by++Hajar

Topic: - it was interesting, and delicious also. :P - it was quite narrow and specific since you were talking about the origins and the production of chocolate. - as one of the audience, i felt it was nice to listen to this kind of topic as it widened my knowledge on chocolate.

Introduction: - the topic was introduced clearly. - the Q&A session was quite interesting. - attention was gained since questions were raised before u begin your speech.

Body: - main points were clear and were well-organised. - so did the suppoting details. - o rganizational pattern was clear. - connectives were clear.

Conclusion: - the main points were summarised in just a short sentence.

Language: - language was clear and concise. - some grammatical errors made. - standard pronounciation was used.

Delivery: - your voice was ok; try to speak louder next time. - there were a lot of pauses such as 'err', 'umm' throughout the speech; avoid that as much as possible. - you tend to refer to the text most of the time. - time management was effective.

that's all. thank you. -SITI HAJAR ISMAIL.