Comment+on+1st+Speech+Presentation+on+1st+Week+by+Rofiza

TOPIC : 1. I think the selection of the topic about the chocolate is interesting and suitable because many people love to eat chocolate especially teenage. INTRODUCTION : 1. You have gain the audience attention nicely by asking the questions that related to your topic. 2. The introduction of the topic was quite clear but still can be improved. 3. The preview of the body of the speech was not so clear. BODY : 1. The body for the speech was full of contents and the supporting details that relate to the topic. 2. The connectives used were not very clear. CONCLUSION : 1. You end the topic clearly and greatly but not summarize the topic compactly but still can be improved. 2. There was no memorable statement. LANGUAGES : 1. The language used was clear and can be understand. 2. There was some minor grammar error. 3. You used standard pronunciation and can be understand but still need to improve. DELIVERY : 1. Less of non-verbal communication. 2. The voice sometime becomes quite slowly and not clear. 3. The time management was very nice. 4. The eye contact with audience still can be improved. Try not to look at the note frequently.

however, you are the great presenter... thank you...:-)